30/10/09

A landscape in my hometown

Introduction:
In the busy and modern life, the demand of travelling is very necessary. Most of us try to find out some famous places such as Da Lat city or Mui Ne to travel on holidays. To me, those trips both cost much money and make me uncomfortable. Although there are a lot of places to visit in our country, I just really love a small landscape with a stream near my house because of sceneries here.
Body paragraph:
Paragraph 1:

Due to the beauty of nature, the stream near my house is an ideal place to visit.
+ The water is so clean and cool that you can see the bottom of stream clearly: no fish, no dust
+ The sound of flowing water is like a melody of nature.
+ There are full of colorful and multiform stones: grey, brown, yellow or white, so it is very useful for the people who want to have a collection of stones.  It is really impress and meaningful to give them to your friends as souvenirs
+ The atmosphere is very natural and real with many trees covering, which creates the natural feeling.
If I have an opportunity to travel, I will always think of that stream first because I can enjoy the beauty of nature with joyful feeling.
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Because of its atmosphere, the stream is the best place for me to take away the worries of life and studying.
+ At the shore you can lie on the green grass and enjoy the beauty of sky: white and black cloud, the breeze of wind
+ The fresh and cool air makes me easier to get rid of stress
+ Especially when I jump into the stream, it seems that there is an electric current running inside the body
When having sadness, everyone often find out somewhere they can be better to forget it. And I have already had one.
Conclusion:
Nowadays, in spite of living far away from my hometown, I often return when having days off because there is a great place to spend my leisure time beside my home. In near future, perhaps I won’t work at my hometown, but I am sure that I will come back to enjoy the freedom and peace there.

23/10/09

short essay

In the world, buses are really popular especially in some big and modem cities such as London or New York. Vietnamese are familiar with buses recent years like the good way to solve transportation problem. In fact, students are one of person who again lot of benefits from the bus , but it brings disadvantages as well
Transportation is always a difficult problem to students but with the development of scientific technology, bus system appears with its advantages. First, you can save money when riding the bus. The prices are cheaper than that of other transportation. Using ticket blocks for month is very convenient. For example, you just pay sixty three thousand for one ticket blocks but can go anywhere and anytime. That is good to poor students. Second, there are so many different routes to choose. They work most of corners of city, most days in year even some holiday. One typical example is that from our school gate to go Ben Thanh market, you can catch the six, fifty six or one hundred and fifty number. Also, it’s easy to find buses we need from website or the map. So you can make a picnic around the city without the worries of movement. The view is important as well. While sitting on the bus, you both sight seeing and read book or see what happen on the street. That makes you more relax. Because of above its advantages buses are becoming the first choose to students.
Beside these advantages, it brings some disadvantages. Taking time is the most important thing. Every 5 to 20 minutes, there is just only one bus working. So you have to wait long time to catch the expected bus. Moreover, in rush hours, it’s easily to stick in traffic. In some major streets such as Hang Xanh square, Xa Lo Ha Noi. It takes you about 1-2 hour to escape from the traffic jam. Another point is that the service is not as good as possible. Driver works with the lack of carefulness because they are both driving and talking or smoking. It causes some accidents which are dangerous to the people’s life. And the bus assistants are really rude, their attitude don’t respect for passenger such as talking some bad words, controlling the people in a hurry. Last but not least, a fewer pocket picker is often in the bus. They pick money, telephone or jewels. Perhaps these disadvantages don’t danger much but they always exist in our lives, so be careful to protect yourself.
Actually, the bus system is established as an achievement making human life become more easy and simple. Although having disadvantages, it gives us a few changes to choose. In near future, it can be improved to overcome difficulties to be more perfect and we use as an ideal mean.

16/10/09

Buses advantages and disadvantages

Outline:

1. introduction:

In the world, buses are really very popular especially in some modern and big cities such as London or New York. Vietnamese people are familiar with buses recent years like the way to reduce traffic jam. Students are one of the people who gain lots of benefits from buses. Yet, to student buses bring not only advantages but also disadvantages.

2. body

ü Paragraph 1: advantages

o Save money

§ The price is cheaper than that of other transportations

§ Use ticket blocks for month

o It’s very convenient and comfortable because there are so many different routes to choose

§ Work at most of corners of city

§ Always at most day, anytime in years or some special days

o The view is important as well

§ Can sightseeing, read book

    • Easy to find the bus we need from website

ü Paragraph 2: disadvantages

o Take much time

· Each bus works every 5 to 20 minutes

· Stuck in traffic easily in rush hours

· Wait a long time to catch the expected bus

o Services are not good

· The bus assistant is rude

· Don’t stop in right place

o Change routes without permission

o There are some thief in bus

3. conclusion:

In spite of some advantages and disadvantages, the buses has been become the first choose for students.