16/10/09

Buses advantages and disadvantages

Outline:

1. introduction:

In the world, buses are really very popular especially in some modern and big cities such as London or New York. Vietnamese people are familiar with buses recent years like the way to reduce traffic jam. Students are one of the people who gain lots of benefits from buses. Yet, to student buses bring not only advantages but also disadvantages.

2. body

ü Paragraph 1: advantages

o Save money

§ The price is cheaper than that of other transportations

§ Use ticket blocks for month

o It’s very convenient and comfortable because there are so many different routes to choose

§ Work at most of corners of city

§ Always at most day, anytime in years or some special days

o The view is important as well

§ Can sightseeing, read book

    • Easy to find the bus we need from website

ü Paragraph 2: disadvantages

o Take much time

· Each bus works every 5 to 20 minutes

· Stuck in traffic easily in rush hours

· Wait a long time to catch the expected bus

o Services are not good

· The bus assistant is rude

· Don’t stop in right place

o Change routes without permission

o There are some thief in bus

3. conclusion:

In spite of some advantages and disadvantages, the buses has been become the first choose for students.

3 nhận xét:

  1. grammar: good
    ideas:
    + clear,specific:good
    + logical: fair
    + coherent: good
    thesis statement: fair

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  2. I agree with Diem Huong
    I think you don't need to use the word "buses", just use "bus" is ok

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