23/10/09

short essay

In the world, buses are really popular especially in some big and modem cities such as London or New York. Vietnamese are familiar with buses recent years like the good way to solve transportation problem. In fact, students are one of person who again lot of benefits from the bus , but it brings disadvantages as well
Transportation is always a difficult problem to students but with the development of scientific technology, bus system appears with its advantages. First, you can save money when riding the bus. The prices are cheaper than that of other transportation. Using ticket blocks for month is very convenient. For example, you just pay sixty three thousand for one ticket blocks but can go anywhere and anytime. That is good to poor students. Second, there are so many different routes to choose. They work most of corners of city, most days in year even some holiday. One typical example is that from our school gate to go Ben Thanh market, you can catch the six, fifty six or one hundred and fifty number. Also, it’s easy to find buses we need from website or the map. So you can make a picnic around the city without the worries of movement. The view is important as well. While sitting on the bus, you both sight seeing and read book or see what happen on the street. That makes you more relax. Because of above its advantages buses are becoming the first choose to students.
Beside these advantages, it brings some disadvantages. Taking time is the most important thing. Every 5 to 20 minutes, there is just only one bus working. So you have to wait long time to catch the expected bus. Moreover, in rush hours, it’s easily to stick in traffic. In some major streets such as Hang Xanh square, Xa Lo Ha Noi. It takes you about 1-2 hour to escape from the traffic jam. Another point is that the service is not as good as possible. Driver works with the lack of carefulness because they are both driving and talking or smoking. It causes some accidents which are dangerous to the people’s life. And the bus assistants are really rude, their attitude don’t respect for passenger such as talking some bad words, controlling the people in a hurry. Last but not least, a fewer pocket picker is often in the bus. They pick money, telephone or jewels. Perhaps these disadvantages don’t danger much but they always exist in our lives, so be careful to protect yourself.
Actually, the bus system is established as an achievement making human life become more easy and simple. Although having disadvantages, it gives us a few changes to choose. In near future, it can be improved to overcome difficulties to be more perfect and we use as an ideal mean.

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