Have you ever wondered how the life is without friends? Have you ever wondered how to make friends with another person politely? Have you ever wondered how you did to build a long lasting friendship? And have you ever ask yourself why you are so sad and disappointed when your friendship is broken down? Let answer these entire question at the moment. And I did. Now I find that friendship is really necessary and important in order to have a meaningful and useful life. So I always try to share and help my friends with the bottom of my heart. That is the reason a beautiful and pleasant friendship has already struck up with American four months ago.
Four months has passed but that day is still fresh in my mind. One day at 6p.m, after coming back dorm from study hard, I took a bath and sat down on a bench in front of my room to enjoy the beauty of sunset. In my eyes the sense was very wonderful. The sunset looked like a red globe on the horizon as if it was last sunshine of day. The cool winds glided past my shoulder lightly. In such fresh and quiet air of city at night, I closed my eyes, took a deep breath and started rethink what happened on day. It seemed that all the worries of life were taken away. I was in a relax feeling, suddenly the cell phone rang, which severed my thoughts. I could hear my friend’s urgent voice “Thuy, are you free? Come out the school gate quickly” and hung up immediately. Something wrong certainly had happened to her, I thought. So I ran as fast as possible to be with her. Just a minute later I stood in front of her with faster and faster breathing. But there was no problem. She just gave me a sweet smile and introduced her new friend, Esther who comes from American. In the first sight I misunderstood that she was Japanese with piggy eyes and petite body but did not. “Hi, nice to meet you” was the first words she said with a friendly smile. We soon became close friends although the time we met is not enough to understand each other well. Then, we decided to go to the supermarket. We walked along street hand in hand and shared a lot about our country and study. It was very joyful for us to go everywhere and try some products. Yet, there were some people around us had a strange look as we were speaking in English. After a while, we went to the second floor, took many photos and enjoyed the dinner together. From our bright eyes, I know that we were very happy as if we were close friends for a long time. At 9p.m we had to return but it was raining heavily. Without hesitating, we all ran out of the supermarket and danced like some little girls never saw raining. Ten minutes later we were as wet as a drowned rat in school gate. It is time to come back home, so we gave email and phone number to each other and said goodbye with great feeling.
Until now, I still keep in touch with her and we often recall our special memory and smile a lot. It seems to have miracles creating our friendship although we are different countries and languages. And I learn that “life without friendship is like the sky without sun,so never stop sharing and giving”. If you give, it means that you receive already.
21/11/09
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